Currently, many people fail to balance work with other parts of life. What are the problems and solutions?

Essay topics: Currently, many people fail to balance work with other parts of life. What are the problems and solutions?

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It is true that many people are becoming unbalanced between work and others of life. These affairs will be discussed in this essay, and there are a range of measures to deal with it.
As a result of busy working schedules, it is able to cause some problems for personal as well as family. In term of personal, have a severe impact on people’ health and productivity. For instance, people who spend longer at work are more likely to suffer from various health issues like anxiety disorders or even stroke. At the family level, busy working schedules prevent people taking care frequently their family or even usually absent in meals together. Relationships among members become gradually weakness if they cannot make time for each other. For example, my aunts divorced her husband because she has not time for taking care her family, and that is a consequence of devoting time on working.
In my views, time management skills should be taught in school, even becoming compulsory major. It offers people have ability to handle overload-work as well as how to balance work with other activities in life. Furthermore, working hours should be restricted by an average of eight hours per day. Government has the power to introduce law which could limit spending time on working. For example, in Vietnam has imposed law labor to curb working hours of employees, just eight hours per day.
In conclusion, unbalance work with others of life cause possibly serious issues for people. Thus, government combine with individuals could certainly implement various steps to tackle this problem.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my view, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06870229008 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60476539259 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5940660278 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24571734616 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881647308756 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984163674539 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16838192992 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046306829286 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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