Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing skills are more important
People have different views with regard to the question of what we should learn after graduated high school. While some people argue that enrolling higher - educated is the best choice to get a great success in career path, I agree with those who believe that enhancing knowledge involves in skills and practices far outweigh.
There are various reason why people believe that a college degrees able to offer students to open more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore an improved quality of life for students who take them. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that people have chance to learn the concept of the university education before going to work. On the societal level, due to demand of enterprises as well as recruiters, by forcing students who are prospective candidates, have certificate of higher-educated and even it is seem to be a eligible application.
In spite of these argument, I believe that people with well-skills and experience would be received attention from the employers, clients, and management which lifts and drops the person. Further and even more importantly, though, people who have real experience and well-skills are able to adapt requirement of jobs and have ability to handle quickly the issues in working progress. Thus, they have more opportunity to be hired than people solely have a bachelor’s degree in the equivalent job. For example, many people in Vietnam graduated university, however, they could not get a best job even unemployment due to lack of skills and experiences.
In conclusion, although completing higher-educated offers students to prepare some knowledge before going to work, I do not think it is enough. Due to a demanding job, I suppose skills and experience are more crucial for students who will be prospective candidates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 502, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Use past participle here: 'certificated'.
...ts who are prospective candidates, have certificate of higher-educated and even it is seem ...
Line 2, column 548, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
...icate of higher-educated and even it is seem to be a eligible application. In spite...
Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...gher-educated and even it is seem to be a eligible application. In spite of thes...
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
...be a eligible application. In spite of these argument, I believe that people with well-skills...
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: WORKING_PROGRESS
Message: Did you mean 'work in progress'?
Suggestion: work in progress
...ability to handle quickly the issues in working progress. Thus, they have more opportunity to be...
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
...university, however, they could not get a best job even unemployment due to lack ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25170068027 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02777338375 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6726717436 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.363636364 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257116967401 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1020915146 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042385939189 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159984078652 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383827740209 0.056905535591 67% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.