Completing university education is thought by someone to be best way to get a good job. On the other hand, others people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Essay topics: Completing university education is thought by someone to be best way to get a good job. On the other hand, others people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the percentage of unemployment has been gradually getting, especially in developing – countries when employers requirements are more and more high. It is believed that getting a university certificate is relatively essential to find a good occupation, others discuss that experience and soft skills have been more significant. In my point of view, soft skills, as well as practical experience, will overshadow the university education and I will address clearly these affairs in this essay.
On the first hand, there have been various reasons why completing high educated degrees has been considered as a necessary and sufficient condition to have decent jobs. Firstly, university generally and lectures privately impart and educate the background information about certain major and offer the student to comprehend the knowledge as well as theories to apply and get the target rapidly. For example, numerous fields which require a range of large knowledge with high professional ability include scientific research, medicine, law. Secondly, the good record and achievements through university certificate demonstrate and respond student’s concentrative and positive attitude at school that is able to create a remarkable impression of employers.
On the second hand, personally, experience, soft skills as well have been played an integral role in possessing a successful career. More in detail, due to having practical soft skills such as communication, teamwork, reporting ability, people possibly tackle and overcome immediately difficult problems, obstacles in the working environment and in their life. For example, according to scientific’s survey, the statistics indicated that soft skills have occupied majority to drive the successfulness, particularly with a businessman. Furthermore, the period of exchanging and cooperating between countries around the world and developing information technology, expert competences like languages or using the computer to obtain a working opportunity in foreign offices and organization are inevitable.
In conclusion, finishing university certificate contribute considerably to getting a decent occupation, however, in my opinion, experience and soft skills are more important. In the future, the student should associate harmoniously between knowledge in major and practical skills with the aim of possessing better career.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00874635569 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29227978075 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594752186589 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.1040307548 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.538461538 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250898496593 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850996777926 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833417407091 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155626859236 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671813248411 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.87 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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