Many people commit a crime due to lack of well-educated. However, nowadays, it’s also happened with high intellectual level. Explain both phenomenal.

Essay topics: Many people commit a crime due to lack of well-educated. However, nowadays, it’s also happened with high intellectual level. Explain both phenomenal.

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It is obvious that the subject of crime has away raised concerns of both the general population and policy-makers. Nowadays, not only low-educated people have behavior of violence, also well-educated people have intended to commit a crime. In this essay will discuss these problems.
There are several reasons why poor educators have committed crimes. Firstly, due to lack of legal knowledge and social awareness, they do not know exactly the regulation of legislation. Without being education, their manners often implement upon a low sense of identity, thus, they have effortlessly become severe crimes such as arson, kidnapping, and so on. Secondly, one of main reasons cause the affairs of poverty that might be low-intellectual level. They are not able to afford the cost of living such as bills, gas, and accommodation, coincidence with a burden in seeking jobs and earning money to raise their relatives. Hence, they have participated in the criminal as thief, shoplifting, and pickpocket to have money paying demand of their life.
On the other hand, people have high-educated also can be capable of crimes. Although, they grasp the regulation of legislation as well as dangers of a criminal, they have taken part in against the law with an expectation of none-strict punishment. Moreover, intelligent people combined with greedy personality, they want to earn rapidly money. Thus, many well-educated people have encroached on their knowledge to against laws and became the element of violence such as copyright violations, hacker, and so on. For example, some of IT in Vietnam committed hacker and stolen information from competitive company.
In conclusion, admittedly, that the majority of offenders are often poor educators, but well-educated people also able to commit serious crimes. Each one have own kind of criminal, however, they also be received top concern of society because its detrimental is threading to settle society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39016393443 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02914979074 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5984435405 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207603520902 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653562009553 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501746156082 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13382790354 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404358390044 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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