In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
Many parts of the country believe that youngsters should not stay with their parents until having married, studying abroad, or working in far-distance. Personally, I think this trend has both advantages and disadvantages and this essay will provide suitable reasons with explains and examples.
There are many positive impacts on teenagers when staying far from home. First of all, It is true that after leaving home, teenagers will live independently so they must do everything by their own hands without any supports from their parents, this makes them become mature. Secondly, disconnecting from parents is a high opportunity for them to broaden their knowledge by exploring and experiencing new things from the outside world. Thirdly, when youngsters no longer stay with their parents, they will have full responsibility for everything they do. Therefore, they should consider wisely before deciding what to do if they do not want bad consequences.
On the other hand, there are still some drawbacks to this upward trend. The first negative impact is that it is unavoidable for people who have left home at the early age to remember their families. For example, people who are students abroad will be homesick easily because they are living in a place where everybody around them is foreign people. Moreover, people will face many difficult problems such as paying bills, finding a job, and so on when moving far from their parents. As a result, this causes stress to themselves if they can not find solutions or be helped by family members.
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages and I recommend other nations to encourage their young citizens to do this trend due to the good effects it brings for them are very effective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09589041096 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70991486607 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5300345201 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.461538462 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337761317414 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113823206442 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703621738501 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213142462497 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765693818799 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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