In many countries nowadays young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages and disadvantages?
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades.Presently, the phenomena of single youth prefer to live alone until they get married. Here, i would like to account for merits and demerits of this trend.
There are manifold benefits of such phenomena. First and foremost, this trend helps to young people to make self-depend.
To give a specific example , they do not live under the shelter of their guidance after marriage which make learn them various responsibilities such as to earn money for their children and run their home. Apart from this, they might learn the importance of money. For instance, youngsters can earn money by doing work or job. As a result, this phenomena allows to
make their bright future. Last but not least, it enables them to make sociable. To illustrate, while doing work can meet with
their colleagues, friends and so on. Thence, they may make better mutual understanding, adjustment with each other and
they become good social character.
On the other hand, it is acknowledged that this trend has certain cons. Firstly it provides myriad controversions to the young people. For example, sometimes they try to show-off in front of society, they are not able to live stay away from their parents but they survive that offers various kinds of hazards, they do not fulfill their requirements like food shelter and clothe. Hence, they might spoil their life.
From my notion, both aspects have their own significance. Few masses assert that it has many pros whole others ponder that it has mammoth of cons. However, it is an advisable that youth must live away from their parents to enhance their
confidence regarding life.
Finnaly, it is universally accepted that it has more advantages than disadvantages. People should encourage youngsters to stay isolate. In this way, youth could live life with happiness.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'apart from', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218390804598 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.169540229885 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0890804597701 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0488505747126 0.0501214627716 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0919540229885 0.0437548338989 210% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.114942528736 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0229885057471 0.0403226058552 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70460716054 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0402298850575 0.0326793684256 123% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0488505747126 0.0861772015684 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0258620689655 0.021408717616 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00287356321839 0.011925033212 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1871.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09446254072 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315960912052 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241042345277 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162866449511 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104234527687 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70460716054 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 67.5758138267 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.619047619 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9419264065 49.517814964 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0952380952 127.492653851 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.619047619 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38877755511 228% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.7232821467 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.14814814815 1.69124875643 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313394390023 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0727118122587 0.102741220458 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0604691962247 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552402882073 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201824395129 0.148594505496 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094356454417 0.134430193775 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427027271956 0.0742795772207 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.135809099958 0.324371583561 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0868532007384 0.0638462369009 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124778923156 0.228012699653 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663695497268 0.058150111329 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.68436873747 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.