some people say we do not need printed paper newspaper anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is universally acknowledge that newspaper plays a paramount role to provide world-wide knowledge to masses. Presently, it is argued that few individual assert that printed paper newspaper is not lucrative for them. Here, i would like to discord with the given statement.
Multifarious points can be put down to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, such newspaper enables people to enhance reading skills.
To elaborate, they can learn lexical resources, enrich their reading speed and so on while reading newspaper. Apart from it, it allows intellectuals to get knowledge globally. To give a specific example, they can read about fashion, celebrities, business and society which broadens the horizon of knowledge. Consequently, they are expected to get as much knowledge as it is said that "Knowledge is invaluable power".
Further emphasizing on my point of view.Newspa[er allows everyone to read it whether who is poor or rich. For instance, one can persue his/her hobby by reading newspaper as it is low in cost. On the other hand, others have conflicting views.
They think that they have no need of newspaper in this scenario. To initiate with, people are influenced by technology that provides a great deal of knowledge. In this context, they can read article, use social websites and read about current affairs of community by using internet. Thus, they are anticipated to not only get knowledge but also they are likely to get entertained themselves.
To recapitulate, some masses ponder that newspaper has no role in this era. However, i still believe that it has more significance as compared to others in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, still, thus, while, apart from, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15925925926 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93805502885 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0745370326 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3888888889 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103457331453 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358171850559 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441448728381 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585828093802 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039304115867 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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