Some people prefer to stay in the same job in their whole life while others want to change their careers. Discuss both sides
with your own opinion.
Job means when employees do work under the employer. Presently, few masses assert that similar job plays a paramount role to live better life. By contrast, others adore to transfer their job as it is said that "change is the spice of life". Here, i would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view. First and foremost, same job provides us experience regarding work. To give a specific example, they can secure their recruitment for long time in companies, industries and so on while joining it. Apart from it, it allows a great deal of sociable. To justify, they can communicate with clients, customers
and many more by meeting with them. Thence, they might make mutual understanding, good adjustment and show their good identification in their community.
On this contrary, numerous points can be mentioned to shore up latter view. Initially, some people prefer to change their work as they ponder that such jobs broaden the horizon of knowledge of different works.To illustrate, they can gain
knowledge from various fields like organizations, farming and banks during working hours. Hence , they may increase the aura of their knowledge to get good job which helps to uplift their living standard.
From my notion, both aspects have their own significance. Undeniably, most of individual acknowledged that to stay in same work is lucrative for their whole life. However, we cannot underestimate the importance of different jobs. It is an advisable that one must choose single work in his or her life, they may become expert, vetran that provide comfortable life.
Finally, it is universally accepted that with the help of single job they can give sparkling performance to employer of the firm. Therefore, they should get same job. They might live life with benevolent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: To
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to single'
Suggestion: to single
...It is an advisable that one must choose single work in his or her life, they may becom...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to single'.
Suggestion: to single
...It is an advisable that one must choose single work in his or her life, they may becom...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224431818182 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.150568181818 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102272727273 0.0946595960268 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0340909090909 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0909090909091 0.0437548338989 208% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.113636363636 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0170454545455 0.0403226058552 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.7847824197 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0340909090909 0.0326793684256 104% => OK
Particles: 0.00284090909091 0.00163938923432 173% => OK
Determiners: 0.0482954545455 0.0861772015684 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0369318181818 0.021408717616 173% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00568181818182 0.011925033212 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1859.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13531353135 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336633663366 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247524752475 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19801980198 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151815181518 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7847824197 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640264026403 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 76.040645633 60.7387585426 125% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.15 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.842867807 49.517814964 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.95 127.492653851 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38877755511 159% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 39.9024752475 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.28865979381 1.69124875643 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352151045236 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0563360461611 0.102741220458 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0541508228506 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493591399293 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170177093153 0.148594505496 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108355287395 0.134430193775 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686668966275 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.152033256125 0.324371583561 47% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0566845103587 0.0638462369009 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179487446451 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496072422938 0.058150111329 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.