IN some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing school and starting university studies. Discuss advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.
Youth are the symbol and passion of our nation. Presently,the trend of young people are motivated to work for one year is
gaining prevalence all over the world. Here, i would like to account for merits and demerits of work
There are manifold benefits of work. First and foremost, it allows to youth to make independent. For instance, they can do their own work. As a result, they have to face less problem in their life.Apart from it, they might become good citizen of nation. to give a specific example, young people can remain safe from bad activities such as consumption of alcohol,drugs addiction and malpracticing. Moreover, they become sociable to meet with their friends and family members.Consequently,
they are excepted to be noble character.
On the other hand , some handful masses reckon that work is done by youth between finishing shool and beginning study of university. Firstly, work provides a great deal distraction. For example, they might divert their mind from their aimbition
what they want to become in their life during working. Thence, they can spoil their life.
From my notion, both aspects have own significance. Few individual ponder that work has more pros than cons. However , it is an advisable while working they will come to know about the importance of life.
To recapitulate, it is unvesally accepted that yoth are encouraged regarding work. They would become habitat of work.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230483271375 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.174721189591 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0743494423792 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0334572490706 0.0501214627716 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0855018587361 0.0437548338989 195% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118959107807 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0408921933086 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85239727471 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408921933086 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0446096654275 0.0861772015684 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0297397769517 0.021408717616 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00743494423792 0.011925033212 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1426.0 1933.35771543 74% => OK
No of words: 235.0 316.048096192 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06808510638 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314893617021 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242553191489 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170212765957 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11914893617 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85239727471 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634042553191 0.56093040696 113% => OK
Word variations: 68.1114779915 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.8235294118 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0850514097 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8823529412 127.492653851 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8235294118 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38877755511 182% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.0788485607 49.1944974215 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.32911392405 1.69124875643 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277176822997 0.332605444948 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0781726023142 0.102741220458 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0835814139825 0.0668466124924 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.550941154741 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187033820634 0.148594505496 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937880077373 0.134430193775 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660296406453 0.0742795772207 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.150210970376 0.324371583561 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0604182965753 0.0638462369009 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137154877782 0.228012699653 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729741854118 0.058150111329 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.