In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think it is happening? How to solve this issue?
In many nations, animals and plants are suffering a significant decrease in their number. There is a host of reason for this phenomenon as well as some methods that can be employed to tackle this problem.
To begin with, the declination in the number of animals and plants can be ascribed to poaching and deforestation. With regard to the former, for centuries, animals have been illegally hunted for their horns, fur and teeth, which have immense value for traditional medical treatments and decorative purposes. Hence, many animals are hunted illegally and they are driven to the brink of extinction with just small number left. For example, the number of blue whales has been reduced from 500 to 300 in just few years due to poaching. On the second point, many trees are cut down to meet the needs of people. To illustrate, overpopulation and lucrative timber harvesting have driven people to deforest, which leaded to adversely concerning consequence, such as the reduction in the number of plants.
Nevertheless, I argue that there are severeal effective measures to address this problem. First of all, politicians can urge the government to impose strict punishments, such as long term imprisonment and heavy fines, on those who cut down trees illegally. Moreover, various international law in protecting animals should be established on the foundation of international agreement. For instance, governments should make attempt to eradicate destructive habits and save the lives of endangered animals by raising funds to protect their natural habitat.
In conclusion, although human activities have contributed significantly to the declination of animals and plants, I believe that some measures can be instigated, namely strict punishments and the introduction of international laws, to solve this issue.
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but, first, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40845070423 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04884848556 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9032199457 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190419537551 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734042991482 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629137965852 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12247129745 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493444346794 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.