In many countries online shopping is becoming more and more popular. Some people think that this is having negative impacts on the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree and give your opinion.
In recent era, people are gaining more momentum towards doing shopping by online websites. So, group of people argue that online shopping is having negative impacts on the society. I, completely agree with the provided statement about bad impact of online shopping on the society.
First of all, online shopping is very demanding in the society instead of retailer shops because of the attractive advertisements and discounts on the branded things. In addition to this, sellers did some fraud with their client by uncertain activities like providing duplicate products and many more. For instance, on online websites, while mankind booked their product on the basis of product's image and specifications but sometimes on delivery time customers achieved their product, which is opposite to image or having bad specifications.
In addition to this, market cap of online shopping is skyrocketed in form of sales, while it creates extremely opposite situations in market cap of retailer shops. As a result of this, local market sales gradually decreased day-to-day. According to the survey, in India, after analysing the online shopping websites, local shops were getting 60% less profit on their local products.
On the other side, not only online shopping is having bad effects but also its having some positive impacts. Firstly, in online shopping, it takes less time and it can be accessed at any time at any place.
To conclude this topic, in my point of view, the online shopping is having numerous hazardous effects on communities as compared to its positive effects but negative effects can be reduced by doing shopping from physical shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28409090909 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67047066404 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7112153362 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280178524566 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115015979989 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780447380189 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159553732236 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969262936986 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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