In many countries recently young people have been living far from their parents from the time they began studies or work until they married. Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages of this trend?
It is incontrovertible fact that nowadays people leaving home at an early age it is common trend. The young people living far away from their parents when they started their education and worker or marriage. However, it has more merits rather than the demerits. I will discuss the cons and prone in my upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with there are plethora of reasons why do the study and work far away from house has a lot of advantages. The first and foremost is when people started live alone for the study and work purpose it is increased the overall personality of the people. Because, a person learn, how to manage all the things in proper time. For example, he or she does the study as well as household chores and some other works. And, they gain the more knowledge because they experience the various situations which he or she does not experience in their house. They manage all their official and personal work alone without the help of their family and another people, and they become a self dependent people.
To continue with my view points, where they are lived sometimes there are no better job and study opportunities so, people go out for the business and the education in further countries or cities. Because, there are full of opportunities for the job vacancies or the educational system is also very good.
Moreover, when they started to living alone they face the many up and downs in life, when a person needs the loving and tender care of their family and dear ones. And they feel the isolation in life sometime it becomes a cause of depression. In this depression, sometime people join the bad company, and they started to do the petty crime and also became a drug addiction person. So, they do not concentration on their work and study, and they spoil their life.
In conclusion, there are myriad of advantages to live alone as compared to the disadvantages. Because, people became confident, self dependent and self-esteem and their personality is also increased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80579710145 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59541547242 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6048721712 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1111111111 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34585635537 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100636948333 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805749652793 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174103511681 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072032584135 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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