In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
Nowadays, some nations people are becoming interested in novels and TV series related to crime. It seems that the constructive role of these items in making the target groups feel enjoyment and improving their imagination has made them common. However, I opine that some potential problems of these books and programs for children and youngsters should be considered.
Obviously, crime fictions and TV crime dramas are so engaging that they can entertain a horde of audiences well. Reading a storyline full of suspense or watching exciting senses, people, regardless of their gender or age, are engrossed in them. Therefore, it has been considered as a recreational activity, making peoples’ spare time pleasant. Moreover, mysterious stories and broadcasts about criminal activities can play a pivotal role in making individuals imaginative more. For instance, fans probably enjoy identifying with heroes in their minds, solving complex criminal riddles, and arresting offenders.
Having said that, I am of the opinion that following crime novels and drams should be limited for some especial age groups. In the formative years, children are mentally vulnerable to aggression that can be found in most of the aforementioned works. They may be stressed out when if they recall frightening scenes of the verbal and visual arts, which could negatively affect children’s mental health. Another possible drawback is an increase in the rate of crime among the younger people. Many juvenile delinquents who join criminal gangs are influenced by the crime content. The young may look at the villains of the stories and series as role models who disobey laws and experience a high level of excitement, so they turn to crimes.
In conclusion, novels and TV dramas about crime are achieving high popularity among some people, for they are entertainments that boost people’s imagination. Nevertheless, they may also bring some dire consequences for children and youngsters.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44625407166 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89991568433 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631921824104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7214955808 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244249648563 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784248063925 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103758613866 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148959605155 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242767325277 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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