Some People think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is believed by some that the government should prevent crimes, while others think each person should be responsible for protecting her/himself against offenses. There are rational arguments on both sides of this topic, which will be discussed in detail, followed by my opinion on the matter.
On the one hand, some people feel that every one of us should take care of our safety as the government securities organizations cannot be present in every breeding ground for crimes. For instance, police cannot deter every incident, such as shoplifting, which could occur everywhere all the time. Hence, it is the responsibility of the shop owners to take preventive measures such as installing an alarm or cameras in their shop. Also, if customers take care of their belongings, pick pocketing will not happen during shopping. Thus, it is evident that each individual has a responsibility to ensure their safety.
On the other hand, there is a limit to what a person can do on their own. In this respect, only governments can enforce strict laws to keep the crime rate in check. Stringent laws will act as an obstacle and reduce the crime rate to a great extent. For example, in the Arabic countries, some harsh punishments such as long period imprisonment or even the death penalty for every offense are prescribed. As a result, people do not dare to break the laws, and the crime rate is much less than in other areas. Hence, the state has to own up to responsibility and enforce strict rules that will discourage people from committing crimes.
In conclusion, there are valid arguments on both sides of the controversy; however, it is my firm conviction that it is the responsibility of the government to arrest criminal activities through enact stringent laws.
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Suggestion:
...courage people from committing crimes. In conclusion, there are valid arguments...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97306397306 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82626591545 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2233559931 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369819980005 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104896292083 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103017426319 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223149579779 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1362871287 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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