Some people say that the age of books has passed; today, information can be accessed via videos, computers, television, film, etc. Other people think books and written words will still be essential for information dissemination and education. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Today, because of accessible digital media, some people believe that books have lost their importance in spreading information, while others argue that written words are a dispensable part of that. I agree with the latter since written words are more reliable and also help people boost their mental abilities.
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that digital media such as TV, videos, and computers are the main resources of information in this era. To begin with, since most of them become updated regularly, users are enabled to access the latest information conveniently. For instance, if a person is searching for the newest progression in marketing, he or she is likely to find a lot of useful content on websites. Moreover, many people are able to achieve valuable information related to academic and even marketable skills at a reasonable price or for free via these media. As a result, this has a positive impact on the literacy rate of society.
On the other hand, others say that written resources still keep their central role in information dissemination. The main reason justifying this belief is the high reliability of these materials. In other words, the accuracy of them is investigated through different aspects before they would be published. A good example of this is books that are used in the school’s curriculum. They are reviewed by some experienced editors whether their contents are scientifically and linguistically accurate or not. Furthermore, learning a course through reading a book could be more efficient compared with following only some instructions of a digital media. This is highlighted where critical thinking, creativity, and concentration of readers are improved when they come across text resources.
In conclusion, despite the benefits of technological-based information suppliers in terms of being up to date and low cost, in my opinion, the written version of them will still be essential because of their higher validity and efficiency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 647, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'medium'?
Suggestion: medium
...ing only some instructions of a digital media. This is highlighted where critical thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30503144654 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05729765398 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9585847067 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.466666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288311178929 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781576771179 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616108816027 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163674428417 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221465508254 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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