Some People think the Olympic games will no longer play an important role in the 21st Century. do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is an opinion saying that the Olympic games have lost their importance. However, I completely disagree with the given statement on the basis of its economic benefits and positive effects on international communications, which are by no means negligible.
To begin with, today, the financial merits of the Olympic for different countries is undeniable. In other words, by holding such an international event, not only the host country but also other ones experience economic development to some extent. A good illustration of this is highlighted in where the attractive sever competitions of this event pose high commercial values and wide interests for mass media and advertisement agencies. In this respect, many new related jobs are created in both countries of origin and destination, resulting in an escalate employment rate. Moreover, substructure development, involving the construction of new sports facilities, stadiums, and accommodations are another favorable impact of such athletic event.
In addition, the Olympic games keep their crucial role as a platform to improve foreign affairs. It is the theme of the games that are held every four years in a different place, and thousands of visitors from all over the world travel to watch them live. Therefore, such an international festival gives people an opportunity to interact with other nations. Furthermore, cultural and political conflicts between different areas are disregarded and participants come closer together to get acquainted with their traditions and customs. Consequently, this undoubtedly leads to strength in humans’ friendship, and bonding results in more sympathy and unity all over the world.
In conclusion, I take the viewpoint that the Olympic games still have a significant role in this century. This is mainly because of the beneficial impacts of this event on the economy of societies and its central role in the cultural exchanges of diverse nations which improves their relationships.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...of origin and destination, resulting in an escalate employment rate. Moreover, substructure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53267973856 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1386724058 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6473124554 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.928571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141495023147 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510761433127 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468573141398 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889249756716 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028309347504 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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