Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays advertising industry has grown significantly around the globe. There are different views about extensive advertising, whether it could persuade people to purchase products or not. In my opinion, publicizing products has a central role in their sale patterns.
On the one hand, many believe that advertising successfully induces consumers to buy things, and I agree. Firstly, it is obvious that some methods and techniques, designed by advertising agencies, make the target customers buy impulsively. Confronting these persuasive factors, people are impressed emotionally and enticed to buy those stuff whether they are necessary or not. Take captivating packaging, using brilliant colors and design, for example; this item plays a pivotal role in the rise of sale patterns in many companies. Secondly, the advertisement could significantly affect people’s image about new-launched products and provide them with information about products’ function and features. Having been bombarded by commercials on TV or pop-ups on the Internet, people will memorize heavily advertised items and become tempted to own these staff consequently.
On the other hand, it is commonly believed that consumers have been numb to advertisements. The main reason for this argument is that paying attention to myriad advertisements could entrap people into the net of greed and mindless consumerism. Being aware of these consequences, people try to skip them immediately. Moreover, many companies apply deceitful approaches to increase sales rates and earn more profits. In this respect, misleading advertisements could feed people with wrong ideas to shop for a possible low-quality product. Therefore, since most people do not want to be manipulated by the companies publicizes, they prefer to disregard them.
In conclusion, although people may vary in their opinion, I take this viewpoint that advertising is a powerful force persuading people to go for buying products because of its great influence on people’s emotions and images, convincing them to shop for products.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7064516129 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13020430327 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1665516415 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263458908586 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820956089171 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483457743934 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164786707913 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225669689814 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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