Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays advertising industry has been grown significantly around the globe. There are different views about advertising, whether it could persuade people to purchase products or not. In my opinion, publicizing products has an undeniable role in their sale patterns.
On the one hand, many believe that advertising successfully induces consumers into buying things, and I agree. Firstly, it has proved that some methods and techniques designed by advertising agencies affect the targets subconsciously. Confronting these persuasive factors, people are impressed emotionally and enticed to buy those staff whether they are necessary or not. Take captivating packaging using brilliant colors and design, for example; this item plays a pivotal role in the rise of sale patterns in many companies. Secondly, the advertisement could significantly affect people’s cognition about new-launched products and provide them with information about products’ function and features. Having been bombarded by commercials on TV or pop-ups on the Internet, people will memorize heavily advertised items and become tempt to own these staff consequently.
On the other hand, it is commonly believed that consumers have been numb to advertisements. The justifying reason for this argument is that paying attention to myriad advertisements could entrap people into the net of greed and mindless consumerism. This, in turn, could worsen the quality of people's lives, so they prefer to skip them immediately. Moreover, many companies publicize in deceitful ways to make sales and increase profits. In this respect, misleading advertisements could feed gullible people with wrong ideas into buying a low-quality product; therefore, ignoring publicize seems to be a reasonable and efficient solution.
In conclusion, although people may vary in their opinion, I take this viewpoint that advertising is a powerful force persuading people to go for buying products because of its great influence on people’s cognition and emotions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78523489933 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12361856318 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7405359328 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265171282148 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852814214689 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052296846366 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16830341634 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295374824326 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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