Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some opine that abiding by local culture is necessary for every sightseer, others say that the variety of travelers' traditions should not be rejected by the host society. I agree with the latter statement because it would have some undeniable benefits for visitors and their destinations.
On the one hand, some people hold this view that following the regional behaviors should be a must for visitors. To begin with, it would help them have a peaceful stay without harassment. In other words, by respecting to hosts' norms, many conflicts stemming from cultural diversity could be prevented. As a result, this probably leads to much more successful communication between holidaymakers and natives, resulting in a trouble free stay. Moreover, abiding the other countries' cultures would play a role in visitors' self-improving. For instance, their traveling experiences and tolerance attribution could be improved in such situations.
On the other hand, it is considered by some that the cultural differences should be accepted by the host country in a more welcoming way. The main reason justifying this belief would be the crucial role of the tourism industry in the countries' economy. In this respect, forcing the newcomers to follow some regional traditions, specifically those against their expectations, may reduce their tendency to revisit such places. Therefore, this is likely to have some adverse effects on tourism-based businesses such as accommodations and transportation units. Furthermore, national culture is an icon of everyone's identity; hence it would be difficult, even impossible, to forget it and adapt to some different customs during to visit every new place.
To sum up, although people have different views about whether tourists should abide by local cultures or not, I believe that the variety of travelers' behavior me should be welcomed by the host country. These tolerant societies are of more attraction for visitors and potential difficulties in facing such new norms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44408945687 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99555823295 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7170360846 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309899262544 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10527227422 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107047569403 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200781483279 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260085422849 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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