Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Evidence shows that many people put the old family members in care homes after a while and do not take care of them at their own homes. Although there may be some benefits involved in this trend, the drawbacks accruing to elders are by no means negligible.
There may be some advantages for looking after elders in some caring centers on the plus side. To begin with, the residents of these places often have sufficient physical condition which can be caused by the presence of trained staff, experienced doctors and medical facilities available 24 hours a day. Furthermore, some older adults find living in these places, which are personalized professionally, more convenient. For example, it is considered to design these buildings without stairs and ramps, facilitating the seniors’ mobility.
However, the downside cannot be ignored. Whereas peer’s companion reduces the seniors’ isolation to some extent, the sense of loneliness can be intensified by less frequent visiting of their relatives, resulting in depression and a significant risk of immune system weaknesses and even death. Moreover, living in such a maintenance center is much costly, and if inhabitants’ budget or retirement salaries are not high, they will be deprived of other pleasures such as journeys. Also, in a much worse condition, their families might be under pressure because of the caring charges.
In conclusion, looking after older people in a nursing home can be both rewarding and problematic. While it might help them to gain better medical attention and, they probably suffer from lack of a family life and high cost of living in these houses at the same time.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21641791045 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83025770107 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.026965234 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238987666657 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832932932829 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103943230817 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157148748151 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122917823565 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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