Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that is school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Teaching children to be good citizens is a crucial purpose for each society. While there are different views about whether this is a parent's responsibility or should be aimed at schools, in my viewpoint, it is the school where children could learn social values practically.
On the one hand, some people opine that parents ought to teach their offspring to make them a good member of society. The main reason justifying this belief is that children would spend the most time with their parents and look at them as role models in life. As a result, parents would have a pivotal role in present those patterns of behavior that help children in their future social life. Moreover, parents are not only sympathetic toward offspring but also familiar with their characters and traits. This, in turn, would enable them to give children more reliable advice to achieve social norms properly.
On the other hand, many argue that school should be mainly responsible for training children to become beneficial for society and I agree. They believe that the school could provide students with an appropriate background to enter the community successfully. To begin with, pedagogical experts and teachers hired in schools could positively affect students' social behaviors. These knowledgeable and qualified staff would use various scientific methods to school trainees desirable norms. In addition, trainees could also practice and institutionalize these values at school as a small community. In other words, they constantly communicate with their peers, which enables them to improve their interpersonal skills.
In conclusion, although people may vary in their opinion, I think that training children to have excellent citizens in the future is only possible at schools where the presence of educated and experienced teachers and opportunities to contact other students facilitate the mentioned aim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31313131313 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72288377778 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 297.0 20.2975951904 1463% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1578.0 106.682146367 1479% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 297.0 20.7667163134 1430% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 157.0 7.06120827912 2223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279067009968 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.279067009968 0.084324248473 331% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174399705453 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690854838446 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 152.1 13.0946893788 1162% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -229.98 50.2224549098 -458% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 119.1 11.3001002004 1054% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.0 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.41 8.58950901804 261% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 120.8 10.1190380762 1194% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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