In many countries today, there are concerns about the unhealthy lifestyles that people lead. What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles? What answers to these problems can you suggest?
Nowadays, there are various problems have arose due to the modern lifestyle of individuals, which has a negative impact on their health and well-being. However, there are some straightforward measures we can take to tackle these issues.
Perhaps the major problem we need to deal with is the lack of physical activity which arises due to a sedentary lifestyle. In other words, due to modern technologies, facilities and amenities, people do not need to engage in physical exhausting labor or walk to get somewhere, therefore, various health problems arise. For example, it has been proven that a sedentary lifestyle is associated with an increased likelihood of acquiring diseases such as heart disease, obesity, high blood pressure and stroke. Another major problem linked to poor diet. Due to lack of time, people have to eat on a hurry, as a result, they consume fast food; thereby, energy-dense foods can cause obesity which is the major problem of our society. For instance, in America one out of three is obese.
Turning to possible solutions, changing eating habits by reading books on nutrition can help to raise awareness of individuals about dangers of unhealthy food. There are numerous books related to this topic, namely, «How not to die», which was written by Dr. Michael Greger or book «China studies», which was based on the most comprehensive research in China. Besides, one long-term solution would be regular physical activity. To simplify, adopting the habit of doing yoga in the morning or walking to the supermarket instead of going by car can prevent various diseases. As an example those who walk 10000 steps in a day are less likely to be depressed and in a state of anxiety.
In conclusion, the key problems of obesity and unhealthy eating can be addressed only by one`s regulation: persistent physical activity and healthy food consumption.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'arisen'.
Suggestion: arisen
...wadays, there are various problems have arose due to the modern lifestyle of individu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13029315961 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81380061935 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5042272351 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155580668234 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501051556479 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04203055419 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980400856808 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446428030662 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'arisen'.
Suggestion: arisen
...wadays, there are various problems have arose due to the modern lifestyle of individu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13029315961 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81380061935 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5042272351 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155580668234 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501051556479 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04203055419 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980400856808 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446428030662 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.