The pictures below show how tea is produced They also illustrate the process of making a cap of tea summarize the information by selecting and reporting mean features

Essay topics:

The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cap of tea summarize the information by selecting and reporting mean features.

The diagram clearly depicts the tea production process and the mechanism of preparing a cap of tea.
Overall, the tea production is a man-made, liner process which begins with sowing tea seeds and finishing with the stage of delivery. After delivery, another process begins with purchasing tea and ends up with the process of adding sugar into the tea .There are 18 stages, which includes the process of making a cup of tea.
According to production line, tea grows in India and China.First, the process commences with sowing tea seeds. Then, when sun shines, plants grow. Next, the leaves are picked and put in basket. This is than dried and packed into boxes. Before delivering, tea boxes loaded onto lorry. In this stage the process of tea production completed.
Once the tea is made and delivered to the shops and market, then it is purchased by customers. After that, customers take the tea home in order to prepare a cap of tea. At home, kettle is filled with water and boiled. After the process of boiling tea, bag put into a cup. Finally, before drinking, milk and sugar are added.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73821989529 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3322111792 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.305570646 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6428571429 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266855955737 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100373514893 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850221334673 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195804385485 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308681642977 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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