The benefits of computers in modern society far outweigh the disadvantages. What do you think?
Nowadays, computer technologies are excessively used by individuals. There are drawbacks certain to arise due to this phenomenon. However, I think that disadvantages of this development are outweighed by its advantages. This essay will outline both sides of this argument.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages of computers. First of all, with the advent of computers, the era of social networking began. Since then, people have created various entertainment applications in which people distribute information about themselves. As a result, hackers break into the personal websites of wealthy people in order to have an access to their privet photos and withdraw them. For example, it was reported that Rihanna's private photos were released during the iCloud hack in 2014. Moreover, many people have lost their job due to gadgets and desktop computers. In other words, computers are substituting for people in factories, as a consequence, the unemployment rate is growing. To exemplify, it is well-known fact that the unemployment rate is increasing since 2000 owing to technological advances and various other reasons.
On the flip side, computers made our life easier. Firstly, everyone can communicate effortlessly whenever they want. By way of explanation, there are plenty of applications that are invented by specialists to facilitate our communication, so we can be connected with our relatives, even if they are in other countries. Namely, Zoom, it is used worldwide to conduct conferences and meetings. Besides, pcs have made it easy for people to earn money. Due to easy access to the data or stock market, individuals can analyze trends and invest on businesses without leaving their home. For instance, millionaire Warren Buffett considered one of the most successful investors in the world and has a net worth of over US $85.6 billion as of December 2020.
In conclusion, despite some shortcomings, computers have greatly changed our lives, by giving us the opportunity to be in contact with all people around the world and the opportunity to work from the comfort of home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...ites of wealthy people in order to have an access to their privet photos and withdraw the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30630630631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08024094523 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6542906638 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.35 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0663253555081 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236343788001 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462792428532 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454257372687 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373070807609 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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