Opinion
Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the data in the newspapers is useless for most people, however, there are individuals whose work is closely connected with the news. Therefore, I partially agree with above mentioned statement.
On the one hand, we cannot deny the fact that the news in the papers takes up one`s precious time. First of all, it is useless to follow the news for those who are overly busy because of their studies. For the reason that studying requires full concentration, therefore, in this case, the news can serve as a source of procrastination, which should be avoided in order to study effectively. For instance, scientists believe that students should focus on getting a better education, instead of spending their time on the news. Moreover, reading a newspaper can be quite stressful for those who suffer from particular diseases. Especially, in this vague time, millions of people are dying because of COVID-19, thus, these news about the death of millions of people can have negative psychological effect on patients. As an example, recently, it was reported that the total number of coronaviruses deaths in the US reached 664,572.
On the flip side, reading newspaper is highly important for traders and businessmen. Firstly, the future decision of traders depends on the news. In other words, they will decide whether to buy stocks or not after analyzing all the news and trends. To exemplify, Warren Buffett the millionaire always read newspaper before purchasing stock in stock market. Likewise, entrepreneurs always follow the news, because, by understanding the pressing problems, one can come up with various new business ideas. Hence, millionaires devote more time to reading the news. For example, Bill Gates spends 6 hours a day reading business magazines.
In conclusion, this essay has argued why print news is critical to many human beings on the planet. I partly agree with the statement that news has no connection to people's lives, and it is a time waste to read newspapers.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 721, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...le are dying because of COVID-19, thus, these news about the death of millions of people c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10638297872 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80727679841 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61094224924 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9491618997 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280854476012 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896593074621 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828233339888 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185243106256 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690793574652 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 721, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...le are dying because of COVID-19, thus, these news about the death of millions of people c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10638297872 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80727679841 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61094224924 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9491618997 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280854476012 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896593074621 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828233339888 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185243106256 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690793574652 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.