Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that individuals’ clothing style can communicate information about their personality and culture. I am largely in agreement, though I would concede globalization has partly obscured these distinctions.
On the one hand, those who argue that a person’s culture and character cannot be determined from their clothing point to the impact of globalization. Due to the globalization, numerous countries lost their cultural identity and most of the blindly trying to copy developed countries` fashion style. As an example, it was proven that people from different cultures trying to imitate to Korean and US citizens’ fashion style. Besides, there various brands of clothes as Fendi, Versace, Gucci, which are disseminated all over the world because people eager to wear brandy clothes despite their cultural differences. Therefore, ubiquity of the same clothes do not give people an opportunity to know something about the people from different countries.
On the flip side, fashion preferences convey some data about particular person. First of all, person's overall look can tell about his or her spirit or mood. In other words, those who prefer black color are more depressive, however, those who like light colors, namely yellow, red, green, are mostly in a positive mood. For example, scholars claim that the choice of a dark or light color depends on the mood of people. Moreover, one`s fashion choices also tell about person’s career. By the way of explanation, those who work at hospitals wear special uniform which reveals data about their job. Also, teaches, businessmen and businesswomen are tend to wear classic black and white costumes which can give extra information about their personality.
In conclusion, though globalization theoretically makes it more difficult to distinguish a person’s culture and character from their clothes, in fact, these choices continue to be revealing. This self-expression is one of the benefits of modern fashion
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...ches, businessmen and businesswomen are tend to wear classic black and white costume...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, by the way, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51465798046 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9933205216 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4572553531 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334699453799 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105209732283 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740369503055 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185782332488 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567530820732 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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