Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Do the benefits of being self-employed outweigh the drawbacks?
It is true that individuals are trying to launch their own brand due to various reasons. In my view, the drawbacks of this phenomenon are outweighed by its advantages.
On the one hand, being a business owner it is not easy because of numerous reasons. Firstly, in order to set up a company people need some capital and years of hard work. In other words, if individuals are eager to run their own business, they should do market research, get and repay their credits and mortgage loans, accordingly, it requires their time to generate wealth. For instance, Warren Buffet once said: it takes a lot of investment and time to set up a company. Moreover, those who want to build their own empire in the business industry work with a heavy workload because in order to be a business owner people should work overtime, find good employees and make a plan of their start-up. For instance, scientists claim that launching a new business venture is a demanding job.
On the flip side, after building a business people can work to their heart's content. First of all, by working on themselves people will have flexible schedule which will allow them to be at work whenever they want because in a company where people do most of the hard work, business owners will regulate the staff and enjoy the cash flow. As an example, Bill Ackman founded the investment firm Gotham Partners and numerous other companies that help him generate money effortlessly. Besides, those who are self-employed can afford everything because they do not need a salary, they have their own big income which can be spent or invested. It is well-known fact that, on average, freelancers earn 45% more than those who are traditionally employed.
In conclusion, except some disadvantages being self-employed can bring advantages like time flexibility and unlimited access to the money which may serve as an income that can be invested on something bigger and profitable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my view, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90548780488 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71196693361 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2747659218 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.928571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246554621843 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735302351221 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548222383871 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138506257899 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613293179001 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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