Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some people claim that acquiring education abroad has its own positive sides whereas, I partly agree with this statement.
On the one hand, attending university overseas brings numerous advantages for students. The main benefit is learning a new language that is absolutely unfamiliar for newcomers, hence, for those who eager to learn certain language, studying abroad indisputable opportunity. For example it was proven that foreign learning environment has positive correlation with proficiency in a foreign language. Moreover, becoming independent is another benefit of being educated abroad. To put it simply, challenges, necessities and destitution force students to make a living, because of this, they became independent.
On the flip side, we cannot deny the disadvantages of this phenomenon. Homesickness is an acute problem faced by students living abroad. In other wards, the process of taking an exam, working and making a household chores make them exhausted, as a result, they seek support and backing which make them to feel homesickness. The other side effect of studying overseas is culture shock which can be highly unexpected, even if students think that they have it fully researched. As an example, they will be faced with new language, customs, food, fashion style, this can be frustrating. Therefore, before going to foreign country individuals should prepare themselves for all the differences that they may face. This does not mean that they should act in the same way, it just means that they should accept culture and customs of that country.
In conclusion, decision about getting overseas education, quite tricky because of cultural barriers and nostalgia, however advantages of foreign education much more greater then its drawbacks
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a eager'.
Suggestion: who is a eager
...amiliar for newcomers, hence, for those who eager to learn certain language, studying abr...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'chore'?
Suggestion: chore
...an exam, working and making a household chores make them exhausted, as a result, they ...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'greater' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: greater
...er advantages of foreign education much more greater then its drawbacks
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'greater than'?
Suggestion: greater than
...vantages of foreign education much more greater then its drawbacks
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... of foreign education much more greater then its drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50367647059 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8683233554 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654411764706 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6890272528 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149034008844 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520838394251 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509303244927 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089982203016 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634227195698 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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