In many countries, women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that while in the past women felt the necessity to marry somebody, nowadays, this need is no longer felt by women because of the financial independence that women can achieve. I partially agree with this statement because together, cultural changes have also played an important rule in withdrawing many women from getting married.<span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="husband "></span> In this essay, the two mentioned points will be discussed with regard to western society.
While 60 years ago having a husband was almost mandatory for a woman, these days the vast majority of women tend to refrain from getting married. Around 70 or 80 years ago, women could not do many jobs that they can now do such as being a teacher, working in a bank, being a scientist, or being a police officer. In the past, women could just earn very little money because they could access fewer and poorly paid jobs, so they needed a husband to survive. Furthermore, many jobs required physical strength, and thus, women were often housewives while husbands were the breadwinners. These days things are different, women can have more and well-paid jobs. Thus, a number of women would marry somebody only if they really want to, and only if this is not an obstacle for their career.
Furthermore, social customs have changed, having babies is no longer a priority, as well as having a husband in order not be seen as a trump. In fact, many women enjoy being alone and independent, and having a husband is often seen as something able to deprive them of their freedom. Strictly related to this, cohabitation has become more and more popular. This phenomenon started around 60 years ago and has been rising dramatically. According to sociologists, people prefer to cohabit for years instead of getting married because they feel freer, whereas being married would be too risky and tight.
In conclusion, in western countries, women have many more job opportunities than in the past, so they no longer need to get married in order to survive. In addition, women are more and more independent and they prefer to cohabit instead of being married because this makes them feel freer.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02747252747 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0777422379 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524725274725 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9091283441 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275638353029 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966771675249 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547216297274 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177948458445 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400797471591 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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