In many countries, women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that while in the past women felt the necessity to marry somebody, nowadays, this need is no longer felt by women because of the financial independence that women can achieve. I partially agree with this statement because together, cultural changes have also played an important rule in withdrawing many women from getting married. In this essay, the two mentioned points will be discussed with regard to western society.
While 60 years ago having a husband was almost mandatory for a woman, these days the vast majority of women tend to refrain from getting married. Around 70 or 80 years ago, women could not do many jobs that they can now do such as being a teacher, working in a bank, being a scientist, or being a police officer. In the past, women could just earn very little money because they could access fewer and poorly paid jobs, and most jobs required physical strength, so they needed a husband to survive. These days women can have more and well-paid jobs, so they would get married only if they really want to and if this is not an obstacle for their career.
Furthermore, social customs have changed and freedom has become very important. In fact, cohabitation has become more and more popular and this has somewhat replaced the institution of marriage. This phenomenon started around 60 years ago and has been rising dramatically. According to sociologists, people prefer to cohabit for years instead of getting married because they feel freer, whereas being married would be too risky and tight.
In conclusion, in western countries, women have many more job opportunities than in the past, so they no longer need to get married in order to survive. In addition, cohabitation is preferred to marriage because this makes women feel freer and less tight.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92409240924 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53717043621 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4247963871 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284392972894 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100077428132 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707037015247 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185723697982 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758608550017 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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