Majority of youngsters move from villages to urban areas for the purpose of doing work or studying. The reason behind this phenomenon can be the availability of more job opportunities and educational institutions in the cities as compared to the rural areas. Although this trend is advantageous as people can avail various facilities in the cities, it has downsides since it leads to an increase in population.
The prominent reason for the migration of the youth is that there are fewer jobs in the countryside as agriculture is the main occupation there. However, in the cities, industries and factories are installed where numerous people can get employment. Apart from this, youth can join various skill and training programmes which would enable them to become an entrepreneur. In this way, they can not only fulfil their basic necessities but also raise their standard of life. Besides this, in rural areas, there are not colleges and universities to attain higher education due to which to pursue graduation or post-graduation, they move to metropolitan areas.
The major advantage of living in the cities is that people can enjoy multifarious facilities like transportation, banking, gym, parks, markets
hospitals etc. Hence, People live a comfortable and convenient life. On the flip side, due to the movement of you to the cities, cities become overcrowded which leads to more consumption of resources and it results in the scarcity of resources. Furthermore, the lack of accommodation would also result in creation of slum areas.
To encapsulate, it can be concluded that innumerable employment opportunities in the urban regions attract the youth. Notwithstanding, it is beneficial in terms of providing facilities, but it arises the problem of the distribution of resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...his way, they can not only fulfil their basic necessities but also raise their standard of life. ...
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Line 8, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ions attract the youth. Notwithstanding, it is beneficial in terms of providing f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, apart from, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35689045936 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20570076183 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6899917372 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116369000729 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373659042939 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374465213449 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641838322264 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479267539196 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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