Many criminals commit crimes as soon as they released from prison. What are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
Rising number of reoffenders in society is the matter of grave concern. There are several factors responsible for this issue which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs followed by its severe consequences.
There are manifold points to share up my view but the most preponderant one is lack of rehabilitation programs for criminals. Apart from that, the criminals in prison get in touch with hardcore offenders through which they learn new techniques to commit a crime. As well as when a culprit re-enter in civilian world then struggle to get a decent job ultimately leading to shortage of money to fulfill basic human requirements. Therefore, theft and other illegal methods are the only way to meet necessities. To evident my point of view a report published by India Justice states that 78% people locked in Jails admitted that they cannot leave their gang because society do not treat them as a civilized human after serving complete sentence.
This issue had major impact on society out of which slower levels of development of nation is having most negative effect. In addition to this, it motivates other minor antisocial elements to execute murders and selling drugs. As they observe these re-offenders and due to weak laws they gather the courage to involve in major felonies resulting in extraordinary level of crime, consequently, people in society feel insecure. Furthermore, investment projects in region with high crime rate reduced to almost zero. According to survey conducted by Mexican Police, 83.56% people in Mexico believes that city attracts no foreign investment because of violence and vulnerable laws.
In conclusion, government’s feeble policies to tackle crime and no special program for employment of criminals is the major crucial reason in causing this issue and majorly it slower the pace of growth of region as a consequence of raised unlawful activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25657894737 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84033814459 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9067270566 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220063698729 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629187181937 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582754529547 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115296341047 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241228580382 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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