Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries. Why is this the case? It is a positive development.
These days, many developing countries are focusing their efforts on increasing and promoting the tourism industries. it is argued that the expansion tourism industries brings back some disadvantage for people and the environment, I still hold a notion that this trend can be a positive development.
On the one hand, the primary reason for developing tourism in a country is due to the economic benefits that it brings. First of all, the increasing tourist services help grow up lots of other services such as medical services, entertainment services, transport services or accommodation services. it creates a lot of new businesses an employments for local inhabitants and the influx of foreign currency from tourists. In addition to this, international tourism can help improve relationships with other countries and can be a golden opportunity for sharing a country's customs and culture. In particular, many people are interested in learning and researching about distinct cultures and tourism helps to facilitate this experience.
On the other hand, this trend has numerous drawbacks. As a matter of fact, most developing countries are a member of the multilateral agreement such as GATS about trade-in service or free trade agreement like EVFTA, therefore domestic businesses have to deal with the competition with foreign companies which have more experience and the amount of capital. Apart from this, tourism has been a major cause of environmental pollution and destruction. For instance, many visitors use bottles or plastic bag and this grows up a mountain of plastic waste every year. Besides, tourists can disrupt and damage local wildlife as well as ecosystems.
To recapitulate, I am strongly convinced that despite numerous drawbacks that arise from the expanding tourism industries, this trend brings more and more advantages for countries as well as for inhabitants. The governments should enforce policy in order to develop tourism industries and restrict a negative impact on the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, as for, for instance, in addition, in particular, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46794871795 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07958618727 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2017017862 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.857142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0714285714 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297565883564 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101167208612 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789628203819 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200754033964 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663694811244 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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