There is a burgeoning trend of upgrading tourism industries around the developing countries. This essay is to provide the causes of this situation and analyse its effects.
There are many factors contributing to this phenomenon. Firstly, some state and the government want to earn extra money. To develop the domestic economy as well as to gain revenue, the countries, namely Indonesia and Thailand, try to attract more foreign visitors. Secondly, inviting tourist will give local a chance to explore and interact with foreigners as world is becoming a global village and everyone should welcome tourists. Lastly, the developing nations can do vertical economic growth and horizontal development by foreign exchange. To cite an example, India has increased its tourism industries, hence it enables not only to develop its infrastructure but also can update standard of living and education.
It is generally believed that tourist brings tremendous benefits to the countries and even the globe. To commence with, the indigenous businessmen and souvenir stores can be benefited when a country takes action to boost its tourist industry. Furthermore, promoting tourism sectors can significantly deteriorate the unemployment rate. Once a country expands its tourist field, there are multifarious job opportunities generated to meet the marketing demands. For instance, restaurants and hotels offer positions for young people, thereby minimising the number of unemployed individuals.
To conclude, more and more nations flourish the travelling business for economic growth and to minimise unemployment rate. It is certainly a positive trend because it benefits the local citizens and its national status.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70196078431 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99910533885 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5337972135 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238449240899 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698390591093 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491364658322 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122073594299 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601926086493 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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