Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?
These days, nations having emerging economies are pouring thousands of billion dollar in their countries' tourism areas in order to expand and update them. Why does this tendency happen? This essay below will outline the reasons for the case as well as discussing its pros and cons.
It is not hard to see that the most popular development trend of countries today is to participate in global organisations where they can earn economy's benefits, boost relationships and exchange culture. Therefore, I believe that investing in travelling industries is one of the wise ways to exploit the advantages that it brings. First of all, a well-developed tourism industry can attract a wide variety of people coming to experience, thereby creating new businesses and jobs for local residents that is an enormous income for the economy. In 2019, for example, according to world tourism & travel council (WTTC) the tourism & travel industry contributed 10.4% of global GDP and over 330 million jobs. On the second point, promoting international tourism not only help to improve international relations with other countries but also is a chance to share a country's customs and culture with people all around the world by their festivals, traditional food, etc..
On the other hand, beside the benefits that this phenomenon manufactures, we can not ignore the accompanying negative impacts. Tourism growth puts pressure on the environment, the hordes of travellers from oversea often litter wherever they go and no bother to clean after leaving in areas they have visited, on average a tourist throw away about 1 kg of rubbish per day, this can lead to dirty roads and clogged sewage system in these places, which negatively and directly affects indigenous people's living conditions. Furthermore, accommodating and meeting pleasantly the demands of visitors mean having to sacrifice native resources. For instance, in several well-known destinations of vietnam,These days, nations having emerging economies are pouring thousands of billion dollar in their countries' tourism areas in order to expand and update them. Why does this tendency happen? This essay below will outline the reasons for the case as well as discussing its pros and cons.
It is not hard to see that the most popular development trend of countries today is to participate in global organisations where they can earn economy's benefits, boost relationships and exchange culture. Therefore, I believe that investing in travelling industries is one of the wise ways to exploit the advantages that it brings. First of all, a well-developed tourism industry can attract a wide variety of people coming to experience, thereby creating new businesses and jobs for local residents that is an enormous income for the economy. In 2019, for example, according to world tourism & travel council (WTTC) the tourism & travel industry contributed 10.4% of global GDP and over 330 million jobs. On the second point, promoting international tourism not only help to improve international relations with other countries but also is a chance to share a country's customs and culture with people all around the world by their festivals, traditional food, etc..
On the other hand, beside the benefits that this phenomenon manufactures, we can not ignore the accompanying negative impacts. Tourism growth puts pressure on the environment, the hordes of travellers from oversea often litter wherever they go and no bother to clean after leaving in areas they have visited, on average a tourist throw away about 1 kg of rubbish per day, this can lead to dirty roads and clogged sewage system in these places, which negatively and directly affects indigenous people's living conditions. Furthermore, accommodating and meeting pleasantly the demands of visitors mean having to sacrifice native resources. For instance, in several well-known destinations of Vietnam, for instance, local people cut down a vast region of forest to build infrastructures for tourism. As a consequence, that causes the soil to degrade, destroying the habitats of native animals.
In conclusion, I would have to announce that expanding the tourism industry in a country is a positive development if it is properly managed. However, we should not only focus on the advantages that it produces, but do not care about the bad effects on the environment. for instance, local people cut down a vast region of forest to build infrastructures for tourism. As a consequence, that causes the soil to degrade, destroying the habitats of native animals.
In conclusion, I would have to announce that expanding the tourism industry in a country is a positive development if it is properly managed. However, we should not only focus on the advantages that it produces, but do not care about the bad effects on the environment.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 41.998997996 257% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4062.0 1615.20841683 251% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 769.0 315.596192385 244% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2821846554 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.26600885375 4.20363070211 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95728145547 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.31599479844 0.561755894193 56% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1256.4 506.74238477 248% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 16.0 4.76152304609 336% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8828423472 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6333333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27795201915 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829993009502 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871379032202 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17142634162 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561842466786 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 962, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...y their festivals, traditional food, etc.. On the other hand, beside the benefi...
^^
Line 5, column 698, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , These
...veral well-known destinations of vietnam,These days, nations having emerging economies...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 962, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...y their festivals, traditional food, etc.. On the other hand, beside the benefi...
^^
Line 11, column 271, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...out the bad effects on the environment. for instance, local people cut down a vast ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 41.998997996 257% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4062.0 1615.20841683 251% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 769.0 315.596192385 244% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2821846554 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.26600885375 4.20363070211 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95728145547 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.31599479844 0.561755894193 56% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1256.4 506.74238477 248% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 16.0 4.76152304609 336% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8828423472 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6333333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27795201915 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829993009502 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871379032202 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17142634162 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561842466786 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.