The tourism industry is one of the fastest-growing businesses all over the world. Not only poor and undeveloped countries but even rich ones are also promoting tourism like never before. Multiple nations are not economically sound but rich in natural beauty and have splendid places to visit. Economies of many such countries purely depend on the tourism business. In my opinion, this is positive progress and I will elaborate on the positive and negative impacts in my essay below.
The tourism industry has a significant impact on the economy of a country as well as on economies of the local communities. When visitors visit someplace and spend their money on different things such as living, eating and roaming, they financially help locals. Also, when foreigners visit, they bring their currency along with them which helps the overall economy of that country.
However, people tend to destroy a beautiful place before moving to the next one. For instance, nowadays everyone wants to climb Mount Everest and even those who don’t have any prior experience of climbing. A research report shows that more than 800 people get buried there in the snow every year because of this reason. Also, many others leave behind plastic bottles, tent and other pieces of equipment which detrimentally affect the environment. To prevent scenarios like this, tourism authorities must ensure that rules and regulations are being followed strictly and should allow only limited experienced visitors.
In essence, promoting tourism is a positive advancement and it only helps countries and countrymen in every possible way. Also as people prefer to visit popular places, promoting famous places helps them to decide and plan their vacation trip accordingly, which eventually brings in more money in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s and countrymen in every possible way. Also as people prefer to visit popular place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30662020906 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66208019344 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9418696069 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111854237741 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037323170097 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333606103494 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677372000594 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225676840531 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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