Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to express my gratitude towards the initiative of sponsoring local interests in my region. I understand that you want to take people’s feedback into account before sponsoring the children’s sports team or constructing two open-air concerts.
On the one hand, sponsoring a local sports team will have its own benefits. As children don’t have proper sports gear as well as any playground, financial aid will help them to buy the necessary equipment along with the development of the ground. This move will prevent any physical injuries to the children and will bring the best out of them.
On the other hand, if you decide to pay for the open-air concerts it will help the whole society, as people will be able to organize events there and once these concerts are constructed, they can be maintained by the people and will remain available for lifetime unlike the two year sponsorship for children’s sports team.
In my opinion, your organization should spend money equally on both local interests. As this area’s population isn’t much, I think, building one open-air concert will be more than enough and the remaining fund can be used to purchase sports gear and developing playgrounds for the local team.
I hope, you find these ideas useful.
Yours sincerely,
Sumit Singh
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i think, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19178082192 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87552341888 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.300869057 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.7 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300759604157 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104046235087 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869005575519 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150531379723 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934720916994 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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