Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow any exercise routine. Why do you think it is happening? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?
Merits of physical activities are evident for all and physicians insist on exercising for elderly. However, sufferers mostly hesitate daily sports. I will discuss its reasons and suggest some measures that could address the issue.
The main reason of avoiding routine exercise is rooted in underestimating its effects on our bodies. As exercising may not have an immediate result on our bodies, individuals may become tired and disappointed. On the other hand, being lazy is more attractive than doing exhausting exercises. Thus people tend to avoid physical activities unless they have really amazing prospective. The last reason could be financial issue. Some have to work for long hours to provide their families’ necessities or they should get back to work before finishing sickness bout.
In order to address this issue and aspire patients to be more active, media such as TV, magazines and communities play a critical role. They could enlarge the knowledge of the society and introduce ample opportunities that people can exercise. Doing activities in a group is more interesting than alone. We are all looking for a partner to start a new activity. Thus, individuals can search for partner among their friends or if they could not find they can try social media. Finally, government should support patients during their sickness bout, because it is a part of basic right of human. Government can provide funds and force insurance company to support individuals in their sickness period.
From what has been discussed above, underestimating physical activity, laziness, and financial issue are the main reasons that people hesitate sports. By broaden individuals’ understanding, group exercising, and government support, this problem could be addressed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, may, really, so, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42545454545 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87825475127 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0356269934 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147992980641 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444189217603 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305660126406 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083783134396 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303073455634 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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