Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. Discuss.
IN the fast globalization world, put in care elderly people in nursing homes has become a discussion every corner of the world. Some people think that , senior people take care their family, but others argued that they are need nursing homes or care homes. A number of arguments surround my opinion. Both of them have their advantages and disadvantages. I shall discuss both views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, every people take care their own health and helm their life. In todays life medicine has become increasing, doctors and our responsible for own health. I think senior people should put take care in nursing homes because doctors and nurses are always know their health. For example, senior people who has the heart attack disease she/he definitely take control doctors. If this patient take care in home , she/he will be die. As a result, doctors are not able to help this people. If this patient treated in the nursing homes, it would be prevented. So that, senior people put in care nursing homes, it better than home.
On the other hand, some people argued that old people are no longer after their families because they want to spend their ending life their families. But some people do not want to spend time their parents. Because , senior people are not able to do some things , activities and they are need affection and take care their health. So that people think that , they are excessive cargo their life. As a result , they are carry parents nursing homes . I think it is not true because these people their parents , they take care their children , so that they are need care their parents .
In conclusion, elderly people take care their families or nursing houses have their both pros and cons. In my opinion senior citizens should take care their families. Because they want to live their family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87619047619 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26111770026 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450793650794 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9126379304 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8181818182 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3181818182 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422698742002 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138989510962 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106229842431 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290269437144 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436938214474 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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