Many elderly peopleare no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In recent years, putting the elderly in care homes instead of taking care of them in their own houses has become usual. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach.
To begin with the positives, a significant advantage is that it is more time-efficient for the family to have the elderly in care homes rather than at home. This is because in today's society people are often running out of time and are not able to free time to take care of their parents or grand-parents. As a result, care homes are seen as very convenient infrastructures to look after the elderly. Besides time-efficiency, care homes bring safety to the elderly because doctors and nurses are available in case of an emergency. To cite an example, the elderly are more at risk to have any kind of diseases, this is why being surrounded by nurses and doctors is vital.
On the other hand, putting elderly people in nurse homes has negative aspects such as the cost of these latter. The reason for this is that in a nurse or car home everything is included from the room to the meals but also various activities. As a result, many care homes cost more than what elderly people earn. Consequently, children frequently have to participate in order to be able to keep the elderly in these structures. Another crucial disadvantage is that some elderly people can feel lonely when moving into a care home. The reason for this is that they are being separated from their friends, family, and home. For example, some elderly would rather stay at home than moving into a care home even if it means to be less comfortable in their daily life.
To summarise, despite all the advantages of care homes such as the gain of time for children and better cares for the elderly, it is important to consider that they also have disadvantages for both sides.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun care seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cares'.
Suggestion: many cares
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, look, so, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68292682927 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60684816336 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490853658537 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0538435899 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34786086739 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127886041711 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525149612958 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205136045746 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628047336635 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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