It is a controvertible believe that wheather economic progress is only crucial achievement or other parameters' progress are equally important for a country. From my point of view, I believe that there are also other things that built the foundation of development for a country so, I agree with second arguement. This essay will discuss both notion and entail my personal opinion.
On the one hand, numerous governments believe that rather than emphasising on other kinds of progress, we should consider economic as a vital goal. If we want to accomplish the desire of folks, it will only possible when the government is strong enough economically. Furthermore, the development project cannot be completed in the crisis of investment, so it is necessary to invoke economic as a fundamental parameter. Todays' world's most developed countries are the perfect epitome, who did not understimate the importance of economic progress.
On the flip side, some imdividuals consonant that in order to be elite from rest of the world, it is imperative to give equal precedence on other sectors also. The government should not neglect health, education, resouces, which are the base pillar of overall development. Despite achieving steep hike in economic, some country failed in overall prosperity which is the consequence of overlooked in other sector. So, I personally think that health, education, transportation are the other sector which mustn't be overshadow. For instance, every people allured by countries like U.S.A and British because of their overall development not only economically but from the perspective of other parameters.
In conclusion, personally, I agree with that other progress are as importance as economic. Undoubtedly, even though facing economic woes, country can withsatnd strong again because of powerful progression on other side.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
It is a controvertible believe that wheather economic progress is only...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
.... From my point of view, I believe that there are also other things that built the foundation of dev...
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Line 1, column 364, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... will discuss both notion and entail my personal opinion. On the one hand, numerous governments...
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Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of progress, we should consider economic as a vital goal. If we want to accomplis...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... give equal precedence on other sectors also. The government should not neglect heal...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
...ansportation are the other sector which mustnt be overshadow. For instance, every peop...
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Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ry people allured by countries like U.S.A and British because of their overall de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, second, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45993031359 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06516057699 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6193348373 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332040610682 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108452394078 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949017763454 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194187395037 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302777189883 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.