Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a controvertible notion among people whether loss of specific species of flora and fauna is considered as major environmental problems or, other imperative environmental issues also exist. This essay will discuss both aspect of folks. However, in my opinion, beside these plants and animals there are also other environmental problems which aquires much more heed.
On the other hand, some personnels believe that current time of environmental problems are due to the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Since they play vital role for balancing the eco-system as well as act as a component of food chain. When they extinct from the nature, its impact will be seen in respective environment . Moreover, if plants and animals lack in number, predictors who depend on them for food, will die out because of starvation. For example, due to dessertification of humid region, most of the species fled, as a result resources of water fade from the site.
On the other hand, some people argue that there are other crucial environmental problems global warming and steep growing population. Global warming is acting as a catalyst to increase the sea level which creates numerous problem in costal areas as well as assists to boost the temperature dramatically. Furthermore, ever- growing population has also determinal effects on environment such as paucity of fresh air and shortage of fundamental needs. For instance, the fatalities rate is increasing due to poisonous gas produced, which we consumed while breathing.
To sum up, there are other numerous important environmental problems among them, species of plants and animals are taken as a perfect exemplary. We cannot neglect other assortment of prbolems because single issue relating with environment should be eradicate in order to preserve animate from danger.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...pinion, beside these plants and animals there are also other environmental problems which aquires mu...
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Line 2, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t will be seen in respective environment . Moreover, if plants and animals lack in...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s also determinal effects on environment such as paucity of fresh air and shortag...
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Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eradicated'?
Suggestion: eradicated
...sue relating with environment should be eradicate in order to preserve animate from dange...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3058419244 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93255486324 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3678194558 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282563674868 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959408782579 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111588349598 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168302606713 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791958470187 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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