Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern world, there are numerous national authorities think that success in economy is the most vital achievement. Meanwhile, some individuals believe that beside economy, other types of goal are at the same inportance for a nation.
Although both views are valuable, I agree with the opinion that economic success is not the most important achievement for a country.
There is a common beief among governments that the most vital achievement is economy goal. To begin, governments always argue that successful business turn their citizens lives into a new leaf. This is because when demands of consumers grow continuously, the more products are manufactured. As a results employees will stand a good chance of higher salaries. Moreover, it is often claimed that economic progress is the best foundation for developments in other fields. The principle explanation associated with this trend is that investors will spend more money to develop technology and human resources quality to increase productivity as well as sales.
On the other hand, I strongly argue that other kinds of progress are equally neccesary for a country developments. First, environmental achievements decide the lives quality of people. For example, the air pollution leading to serious diseases happens more frequently and affects negatively to lives. As governments gradually solve the situation, they ensure that their citizens are safe and allow futher practices. Second, policies inprovements and adaptation is another important success. For instance, in Vietnam, despite large covid 19 epidemic expansion, people are being prevented by authorities establishing neccesary political measures.
In conclusion, although various national authorities balieve that economic achievements are the most vital, however, i strongly argue that beside, there are many factors that are equally important as that of economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly, the more products are manufactured. As a results employees will stand a good c...
^^
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'development'?
Suggestion: development
...ess are equally neccesary for a country developments. First, environmental achievements deci...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66315789474 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97713457127 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8317182693 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316560807504 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082872161067 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738653440555 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165184685764 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426836352478 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.