Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most of the countries have one main motif of raising their capital as economic standard is one of the most significant criterias to judge a nation's development. Yet, there are other people who hold the opinion that other sections of progress have equal importance.
As far as my opinion is concerned, I strongly advocate the latter ideology. This essay will discuss both the views and use examples from a report published by UN, California and from a survey conducted by prominent Psychological department of Montreal.
Today's society has became extremely judgemental and majority of judgements passed are based on wealth any person or country owns. Many people believe that in order to have a happy nation, government should provide more employment opportunities so that people will be able to make more money. They believe that any country's development depend upon it's gross national income. But this belief contradicts a study performed in Montreal.
Psychological department of Months held a survey in 2016 where they tested the satisfaction level of rich families in different countries. The results were immensely surprising as 60% of the people said they were not as happier as they thought they would be once they would accumulate wealth. They still lacked the reasons to be happy about. When asked about the reasons behind this, researcher said that better economic conditions do not mean that a person would be content.
This belief was supported by the people who thought that other factors are also responsible for progression of country, like better living standards, health conditions, clean environment, safe neighborhood, better food facilities etc. Physical well being should be considered as one of the important aspects for development of country as if a person is not healthy then there is no point of generating more money. Also safety in neighborhood contributes to the the overall development of a country as well, as fear in citizens will abate the unity among them.
Also, economic conditions of a country is only judged according to certain rich families. Meanwhile, the areas like slum regions are often ignored albeit they are omnipotent. This was also reported by UN in 2019 that developed nations like America, Japan, China and so on, have more number of people living in worst conditions, like ghettos than the ones not considered as rich countries. Thereof, other types of progress are equally, infact more important than economic as they take into account the responses of every part of the countries.
To conclude, from the above arguments and examples, I corroborate the opinion that along with economic progress, other types should be taken into account by the government. This is likely to happen as various countries are giving more attention to increase their overall progressive index which includes all the important aspects including, economic, physical heath, happiness and so on.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Suggestion: become
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Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Suggestion: in the worst
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2483.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 471.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27176220807 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78984769578 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 778.5 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2840562141 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.238095238 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38095238095 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219850701637 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602647176231 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586305189477 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111091390777 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647929751711 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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