Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Undoubtedly, numerous governments endeavor to build a prosperous future. Hence, a vigorous debate has been sparked over whether economic growth is the major objective. It seems to me that economic growth is crucial, but other measures, such as social development, absolutely essential.
First, economic progress has a great significance. This is due to it provides more job opportunities, so that abject poverty might be eradicated, which contributes to distributing income equitably. For example, Japan, which has one of the most powerful economies, has the lowest unemployment rate since their economy has been grown. Moreover, by dint of economic growth, governments could enhance the public service and improve infrastructure. As a result, not only does the progress of economy create more jobs, but it also uplifts standards of living.
However, social development is one of the major aims as well that cannot be overlooked. The primary cause is that social development can safeguard human rights, and this can lead to retaining personal integrity and human dignity. Therefore, this may eradicate racial segregation. Furthermore, social development could improve quality of life because it ensures equal gender opportunity. According to a recent study published in 2009, Finland is one of the best places to live in because it has equal gender opportunity, and it is unlikely to suffer from discrimination. Thereby considering social development assists to have a high quality of life.
In conclusion, economic progress plays an increasingly important role in many countries. Nonetheless, I believe that economic development is as significant as economic progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is as significant as economic progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6442687747 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19414546698 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624505928854 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3533454521 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148011156583 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484413639252 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507451879967 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981601326612 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665799545139 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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