Many of the medical problems that people are experiencing in today's world are due to the fact that we have a very sedentary lifestyle.
To what extend do you agree or disagree.
It is undoubtedly true that modern people are facing up to new health problems and ailments than before. Many people claim that this is because of their inactive lifestyle. However, I think that this could be one of the critical factors. But we cannot neglect the other factors that are even having a more significant impact on the lifestyle of people.
To embark upon, I agree that a sedentary lifestyle leads to many problems. It is often seen that people spend most of their time sitting at one place at doing their work because of the hectic lifestyle. For Instance, if an individual is working in a company with working hours of 9 daily, most of his awake time is spent sitting in one place. As a consequence of this, the body can become stiff and most if its movement starts restricting with time. Moreover, they also spend most of their time sitting in front of the tv or other tools.
Nevertheless, there are some other causes of why people are experiencing serious medical problems. Firstly, the environment of the modern world polluted vary significantly from greenhouse gas emissions and other gasses. For example, many people are suffering from allergies and different kinds of diseases because of these gasses. Secondly, foods with a low quality such as fast foods, junk foods, and any genetically modified ones are influencing our health very negatively. Finally, life becoming more stressful due to some recent problems such as traffic Jam, traffic accidents, and others.
In conclusion, due to advancement in technology in the present days in which we live, there is a growing increase in the number of people living a sedentary lifestyle, and this is associated with health problems. However, there are also some other issues which make human life worse.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98322147651 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65068598858 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7403286743 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178653320215 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553093096456 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048539536119 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103276690474 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248794833344 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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