Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree?
In many countries, the government have the authority to decide how many children its people can have. Some governments try to control the population by imposing higher taxes on people who have more children than is permitted. However, I agree that in order to control the population growth the government should have the legal authority to determine the size of families. In this essay, we will first examine how the problem of overpopulation can be controlled through such measures and also how proper check on population can lead to an increase in the economic growth of a nation.
To begin with, the world is witnessing the adverse effects of overpopulation like crime, illiteracy and pollution in many countries. With the implementation of taxes, people will understand the benefits of having a small family and this will in a way make them plan for a baby well in advance. For instance, In China people follows a two-child policy and citizens violating the law often have to pay fine or face other types of punishment. Such stringent laws have enabled them to control their population growth, and now it is developing rapidly.
In addition, if a state authority can control the birth date by imposing higher taxes or fines on violators, they will observe an elevation in the economic and social growth of their country. People will have a good standard of living. Children will grow up to be more disciplined as well as responsible citizens of their country. Thus, this measure will boost the economic growth of the country. To illustrate, according to a survey conducted by a UK university, families having one or two kids are the happiest.
In conclusion, the government should have the legal authority to reduce the size of families by imposing fines or other types of punishment on people who have more children than is permitted. While this might seem to be a violation of the rights of citizens, in the long run, it will benefit everyone by helping the economy grow. Hence such measures are justified.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93548387097 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79410744303 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49853372434 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1831716647 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332465275657 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10685647606 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752724181509 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200538802067 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959342891933 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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