Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited bay tourists but not local people.
Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
As a matter of fact, residents do rarely have a visit museums and historical sites in their areas. There are some reason for this situation and a range of effective solutions are needed to bring them to these places.
Museums and historical sites are not considered as favourite destinations for local inhabitants due to two primary reasons. The first reason is that people are too familiar with these places. Although exhibitions in museums often change over the time, these are quite little various and frequent enough to attract nearby residents. In the same situation, almost people have knowledge about the historical sites in their region when they have visited these sites on the first time and they tend to find more attractive sites to broaden their mind in historic field. The second is that people have been surrounded by more and more interesting activities, have been renewed regularly and can catch up with the hottest trends all over the world, rather than visiting no-new destinations.
Attracting nearby residents to museums and historic sites requires a range of complex and creative solutions of authorities relatively which are difficult to present in space of a short document. However, there are some simple methods which should be implemented in priority. Firstly, the exhibitions in museums should be refreshed more regularly with more various items which either relate to living of local people or adhere to the development of their area. Secondly, essential social events of the region should be organized at historical sites in order to connect previous time to modern life as a flow of history.
To conclude, it is clear that people will visit museums and historic sites in their region when they are attracted by activities hold in there places. This will become reality with effective solutions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17845117845 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6139615222 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2325904992 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.307692308 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323168228337 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110018239799 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563020755643 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194866796375 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427320488077 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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