Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
The museum is a historical and educational place visited by people of all ages, some of which are opened to the public free of charge while some ask visitors to pay the entry fee. The essay is to pinpoint the advantages and disadvantages to this policy, which charging museum visitors before concluding how it is positive.
Admittedly, the drawbacks attached to the requirement to buy ticket for museum visits are definite. Firstly, the regulation may discourage students and low-income families from visiting those historical places since they have more choices without admission, such as watching documentary films to learn about history. This will limit the access to the exhibitions of artifacts and historical works, and consequently, reduce the interest in their country's history. Secondly, museums mostly run by state funds for education purposes, so charging fee to make it commercial and therefor lose the original purpose of its construction.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned drawbacks associated with tickets are applied, I am convinced that they are eclipsed by the following benefits. The initial reason is to boost service quality in museum because we have funds to upgrade facilities, redecorate or employ security guards. Also, museum will become only visitors who want to learn more about history, because those wanting to find a recreational place will opt for parks, shopping malls or supermarkets which are free rather than museums. The final benefit is to ease the burden the government budget. If museum tickets are not applied, there should be also no charged for a range of other public facilities as temples, zoos and stadiums, which seem to impractical.
In conclusion, despite some negative effects of applying entrance ticket to museum, I still believe that they are overshadowed by more positive impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91725357851 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0517119686 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250798384943 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862251246076 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748074802826 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142660186986 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654887477829 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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