Many Offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishments.
Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem.
leisure time can be used in an almost infinite number of ways. Which of them is the best? although the answer varies greatly from person to person, I believe leisure is better used improving our minds than on any other kind of activities.
The main reason behind this statement, is the idea that people should do all their efforts to constantly become a better version of themselves. No one is too good to be unable to find something to fix or improved on their personas. What better way than improving our cognitive abilities? The old greeks had a saying for this: "Mens sana, corpore sana" or healthy mind, healthy body.
Activies aimed towards improving the mind, open opportunities for people to learn new things and discover many others that they previously ignored existed. Thus, allowing them to have a broader understading of the world they are living in and therefore being involved to be more engaged in it.
Nevertheless, it is true that humans are not only made of ideas. Excercising and socializing with others are also key activities for humans to have a healthy development. therefore, although the best way to spend our leisure time is by improving our mind; it cannot be the only thing we do our spare time.
To sum up my position on this issue, I would say people need to workout their minds without forgetting about their bodies and social skills. only then they will be able to have an integral development and become a significant contribution for our kind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, kind of, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89453125 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65521291795 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2017934825 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981651653341 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326322042188 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265974727577 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539537172784 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257211560559 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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